Tuesday, October 16, 2007

Poem.. Cool Ad..

His Id...

His feet pounded the black space beneath his feet
Speckled with dry, wizened brown leaves

Falling silent sighs lost to the wind

Of dreams deferred

A canopy of the dying and withered
Welcomed in to its dark embrace

Memories crunching.. pulverized

From his consciousness

Tossed into a bottomless chasm

Of distant loved ones

Receding figures in his rear view mirror

Fast fading, sepia tinged memories
..

And he kept running in to the arms of his id.

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24 comments:

Aditi said...

nicely written poem.... been a while since u wrote..=)
that is a cool ad

Beenzzz said...

Very lovely poem, Sanjay.

I like the ad! :)

Lotus Reads said...

HI, Sanjay!

As you know I'm a big fan of your poems so I was delighted to see one here when I checked in just now.

You have such a way with words even when the subject matter is sad. Please write more poetry when you can!

BTW, I'm curious about the title of your poem....what is id? I'm sure I know it, but I'm just not getting it for now.

Love the ad!!!

Sanjay said...

Hey Lotus!

Thank you for your kind words, and for stopping by. I am indeed glad to have in you a big fan of my poems! :)

I hope to be able to keep writing, for me it needs to be a particular kind of mood and one never knows when that happens. This poem came to me as I was running in the park, with no one around me but me and my wandering mind and the scene as described in the poem. :)

"Id" as described in the dictionary ... the part of the psyche, residing in the unconscious, that is the source of instinctive impulses that seek satisfaction in accordance with the pleasure principle and are modified by the ego and the superego before they are given overt expression.

Also from wikipedia.. A popular interpretation of the id is not that it is "convincing" the mind to ignore social norms, but rather in itself just does not take social norms into account when 'thinking' or 'acting'. The id is the primal, or beast-like, part of the brain, determined to pursue actions that are pleasurable, such as eating or copulation. The prime motive of the id is self-survival, pursuing whatever necessary to accomplish that goal.

I hope that also makes the poem and its interpretation easier?

Sanjay said...

Beenzzz.. Thank you very much!

Wellingtonbala said...

Beautiful. Your explanation facilitates better interpretation.

Keep it up Sanjay.

Frank Jump said...

great poem. cool ad. blogged you on my blog http://fadingad.wordpress.com.

keep the karma flowing.

happy chi
jump

Frank Jump said...

http://fadingad.wordpress.com/2007/10/17/cool-ad-from-karmically-speaking/

Diana said...

That is a cool ad but an even cooler poem.

Anali said...

Nice poem! I love it when you post them!

Sanjay said...

Hey Wellingtonbala, Thank you for your kind words and for stopping by.

@Frankjump.. Thanks.

@Diana. Thank you very much.

@Anali. Thanks. I can never predict how and when I can write one. :-/

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